I really liked this line "If she was a ghost, these chains faded right through her wrists. If she was a ghost, not one of these men could dare touch her. For ghosts haunt."
"They were the objects of the haunt, not the victims." What a staggering closing sentiment. A powerful exploration of reclaiming power in the darkest of places....thanks for sharing this, friend.
Love it! Riveting! There’s gotta be more…..!!!!
This was haunting! the last part felt like a trance, like she was seized by another power—well done!
This is amazing!! I love the flip from broken to confident. The line "For ghosts haunt" gave me chills!! 🤍
Love to hear it! Thanks for the kind words.
I really liked this line "If she was a ghost, these chains faded right through her wrists. If she was a ghost, not one of these men could dare touch her. For ghosts haunt."
Nice one. Thanks you, sir.
Well, thank you sir! Was an emotional one to write.
Makes great art.
I think I dated that guy once…
Exquisite! Beautiful! Hauntingly majestic!
Loved every word of it.
Chilling and tense. Looking forward to reading the next part. Nice work.
"They were the objects of the haunt, not the victims." What a staggering closing sentiment. A powerful exploration of reclaiming power in the darkest of places....thanks for sharing this, friend.
Really well written and so topical right now .