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Clay Toleman's avatar

I laughed when the main character said “Shit.”

Simple and matter of fact delivery.

As if he dropped hammer inside a wall never to be found. “I’ll just have to get another one as the world splits apart.”

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Matthew's avatar

I liked the sudden shift in tension, and the characters were written realistically!

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